I received a lot of feedback telling me that my design was very eye-catching and interesting, but there was a lot of confusion as to whether the person in the design is a ninja or a hostage.
To resolve this I would like to illustrate a sword infront of the characters face with a reflection of her enemy in hopes that it will be made more obvious that she is a ninja in training. The image below is an example of how I would like it to look although I don't have much time to design it and also get it screen printed. I will wait for the final crit this friday and see what other feedback I receive and whether it is worth it.


